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Artist's Comments
Nice to meet you, Singapore.
Come meet us on Thursday, May 21st 2009!!! Visit #hq for details. For you critics: I'm not sure exactly why I'm not 200% confident about this photograph. I think it's because I've angled it intentionally because I liked it.. but I know I get slapped on the wrist every time I do that so please tell me what you think about this aspect of the composition. Otherwise, I applied an enhance effect in iPhoto to eliminate a lot of particle noise in the air in singapore that I couldn't have done anything about in the snap. Everything else is as I shot it, no modifications. CommentsI would take the woman in focus, down left a bit closer to the edge to avoid cropping half-people on the bottom right.
Aside of that, to be fair, a pretty boring photo. City scape. It's not a bad photo. Just you know... boring. But it doesn't make it bad -- What can I say... I'm an idiot. My recent work Best link ever I think I would like it slightly less tilted, it would work better compositionally
-- For great justice! Check out #MasterPhotoshop, your hub for the digital world! Mudkip Stykera avatar made by the awesome *RJDaae The dancing mudkip has a very valid point yah I can see the boring part... it excites me cuz I'm in the city and I like the city and I'm generally unfamiliar with the cityscape for singapore... so perhaps that novelty for me is what makes the photo exciting. but that aside? maybe it's a good tourist shot and not worth the post.... hmmm bah, at least it's perdy.
-- The Angry Deviant Random Deviant I like it exactly because of the composition. Don't mind the slappers. They slap you because you slap their conventionality.
-- Energize! now that you say that, I think you're right... a little less tilt.....
I dunno when I first saw it I loved it... now it's not so good. BAH! hehe -- The Angry Deviant Random Deviant |
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Critiques
Second, I appreciate how there was very little in the way of photo-editing. It makes the picture seem truer somehow, more frank.
Also, you really came along at a great time; all the lights are against a clear night sky. It seems colorful, bright, but not in a rainbow-y sense, if you understood that. Sort of simple and complex at the same time.
Now if only my travel photos looked this good. Oh well.
But generally I like this photo very much. Especially because I haven't seen city like this in real, only on the photos, so they're always fascinating me. We haven't them in Poland.
Yet.
I love those lights. I love those colors. And that it's a good technically photo. Everything is sharp and well visible.
Only could be bigger...
So generally - I love it.
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